When We Part

Sep
11
2006
Posted at: 2:00 am
Filed under : Uncategorized


if i acclerate your heartbeat would you decelerate my rotation about your feet.
if i begged your velocity to slow all this down would our displacement be miles farther apart.
if i told you this nonsense is a link between astronomy and physics
late night studying for an ackward quiz
summarizing all of what i read no doubt this outcome is rather marvelous
tells you for a fact my minding is on focus 😉
but damn memorizing equations is a setback
these constellations in the sky are lighting this knowlegde
overflowing my revolution in the course of my orbit
neither physics nor astronomy can ruin my forecast 😉

creative dontcha think ;P

2 Responses so far

  1. 1

    Bloo said,

    September 12, 2006 @ 1:48 am

    yes it is creative, and u don’t need to put (;p) to place some joke on it. really, it is creative, and u know it.

    i know for a fact, u’ve started this piece on a spirit different than the one u ended it with.. nt to say it took u days.. or even hours.. it emphasises ur impatience, .. that way.. u start great.. and then u wanna enjoy that greatness so u rush to the end.
    good work UB

  2. 2

    Your Battlefield said,

    September 13, 2006 @ 4:53 am

    bloo:

    🙂 yup your absolutely right my begining was great but i kinda ruined the end by ending it with rush…my eyes were longing to close and sleep for a few hours..

    thank you ;p

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